Standup
comedians often discuss and sometimes argue about what constitutes an
effective joke or bit, or even an effective act. While comedy may
seem to some like an arbitrary art or craft, dictated only by
“Whatever's funny is funny”, in fact some very firm and logical
rules apply, which will yield predictable results more often than
not.
In
the case many of the detailed decisions within a comedy bit, perfect
prediction of success is nearly impossible, and thus live
experimentation with an audience is the bread and butter of a
comedian's act. Is “New Jersey” or “Madagascar” a funnier
ending to a specific joke, as measured by audience reaction? Does a
French accent in one passage make a bit more or less effective? Is a
hard swear word necessary within a certain punchline to get a
satisfactory level of laughter? These are all options that need to be
test driven in the field, so to speak, on a standup stage with some
sort of crowd, ideally in a low-stakes situation, meaning a lack of
industry gatekeepers.
I
often talk of the “chemistry” of different elements within a
comedian's bit and the unknowable 'X factor' of what word, what voice
modulation, what gesture, volume, attitude and so forth will yield
great results or not for a specific comedian in a given moment.
Certainly at the beginning of the joke-crafting process, most
comedians put the greatest emphasis on the words. There are
exceptions- impressionists, prop or musical comedians, extremely
physical comedians, who may emphasize vocal characterizations,
melodies or sight gags early on in the process- but if one had to
generalize, the construction of the words is where most comedians
begin the joke-writing process.
While
the tiniest specifics, often boiling down to matters of an almost
ethereal subtlety, must be put to the test of live human interaction
by A.) performing them out loud in a committed manner, and B.)
observing them bounce off an objective and receptive audience, there
are some very basic overview decisions that a comedian can safely
make at the outset. One of the most primal divisions between
comedians acts, I believe, is that between what I will call the
Honest Opinion Talkers and the Ironic Extreme Characters. So, let me
explain....
Back
in the very early days of standup comedy, from the twenties and
thirties onward, comedians told jokes, very short jokes, and the art
of comedy was meant to entertain in a very light and superficial way.
The jokes were clever and surface-level, had a fairly generic quality
and not only could be used by more than one comedian, they often
were. Henny Youngman said “Take my wife, please.” Milton Berle
quipped “We grew together. I grew up. She grew sideways.” Bob
Hope mused “I've been playing golf so long that my handicap is in
Roman numerals.”
Sometimes
these early comedians worked facts of their lives into their acts,
but mainly the jokes were close to interchangeable with others
sharing their general persona, rather than the kind of unique,
biography-based material that's so commonly today. The persona of
these joke tellers onstage was the polished professional entertainer,
period. They were not pushing a figure of ex-auto mechanic, former
school teacher or one of ten children brought up in a house with
eccentric parents. With these comedians what you got was basically
what you saw- a suit-clad entertainer keeping things moving along
with zingers. Whimsical philosophical explorations; naked, vulnerable
honesty, and powerfully controversial points of view were not what
this comedy was about. If truths were embedded in the material, it
was fleeting and submerged, in favor of light-hearted punchlines.
A
classic character act tells “lies” because they have a tragicomic
blind spot and don't know what's really going on. Their jokes are
tightly crafted and the punchlines come quick and hard-hitting. Great
character acts have a very strong quirky voice and style on stage, so
that everything they say, even the most
basic top-of-set introduction and the driest setups get laughs
because of what's being related by their appearance, gestures, facial
features and vocal qualities. When Larry The Cable Guy says “My
brother got eliminated from the spelling bee. Apparently, there ain't
no number eight in the word 'pollinate',” we know that this never
happened. His brother never thought there was an '8' in the word
'pollinate', and we doubt his brother even did a spelling bee. Maybe
he doesn't even have
a brother! Larry's character is extreme and it's also the way
he says it. It's funny because it isn't
true. He's playing a character with very strong eccentricities- a
classic self-deprecating, oblivious fool with a sheen of bravado.
It's classic character we see different variations of again and
again.
Rodney
Dangerfield informs us: “Last week I told my psychiatrist, 'I keep
thinking about suicide.' He told me from now on I have to pay in
advance.” The audience instantly knows this interaction did not
happen between Dangerfield and a psychiatrist. But the line is very
funny in its elegant economy, and it relates the spirit
of Rodney's self-lacerating identity. Strong character acts have
exaggerated voices and mannerisms, which help reinforce the
perspective that the “character” is coming from. In other words,
the flamboyant oddness of the comedian's persona reinforces their
ignorance of the real world. It also makes all of their words
entertaining even before they've said anything funny on paper.
On
the opposite side of this comedic divide we have the plain
conversationalists, or those sharing honest opinions. They are also
sometimes called “monologists,” a very different usage than as
relates to the generic term “monologue,” which just means one
person speaking.
The
honest opinion comedians can share stories from their life, or create
a bit based on their attitude toward a general phenomenon, or even
tell short observational jokes, but the common denominator is that
the material is not based on fictional left-turns that the audience
knows could never have happened The comedic bits are based upon
some type of interpretation of real phenomena, often using the
constructs of “what if,” analogies or rich description in order
to get laughs. Honest opinion comedians must utilize deeper
analytical abilities and generally work high up in their intelligence
to work very high up in the craft. The audience “trusts” that the
honest conversationalist comedian is essentially telling the truth
and standing behind what he or she is saying. They are not just
ironic zingers as said through a wacky character version of
themselves. Honest opinion comedians can stretch and enhance things
sometimes in terms of their actual opinions, and even embellish
seemingly nonfictional stories, but the point is that the audience
believes it could be true, and it feels as if there are
philosophical, social or even scientific truths being told, which are
very funny at the same time.
Popular
comedian Patton Oswalt has a classic bit, many years old, about how
the menu at Black Angus is so full of decadent, highly caloric items
that it seems like a hostile “dare” or challenge to the customer.
He describes a fictionalized menu item with a comically endless
litany of fattening ingredients. It doesn't matter that the item and
its ingredients are fictionalized to attain the comedic effect. What
matters is that Oswalt really does think that Black Angus' menu is
full of over-the-top, unhealthy items, and seemingly much of America
would agree. We all understand that he's giving us exaggeration. But
what's important is that the basic premise is very real and honest
and that the exaggerated execution only highlights a concrete truth.
Bill
Burr, whose act is based on a lot of daring social and lightly
political commentary, is master of taking seemingly controversial,
unpopular (especially among the audience he's playing to),
politically incorrect stances on issues, and then defending said
stances to the crowd like a criminal lawyer. Burr wins over the
audience with his very strongly crafted cases that seem to be
fighting an uphill battle, making his astute- and hilarious- points
all the more impressive.
On
one especially killer bit, Burr questions the seemingly prevailing
wisdom among many women- which was proclaimed on Oprah's show- that
being a mother is the most difficult job in the world. Burr launches
into a tirade about how twisted and rigged that conclusion must be,
how much easier many full time mothers actually
have it than they'd like us to believe, and then talks about jobs
which really are the most difficult. He relates the topic to one of
his own jobs earlier in life, stating: “I thought roofing in the
middle of July as a redhead was.” Burr then continues, elaborating
with comedic specificity all of the luxurious and comfortable
amenities full time mothers enjoy on the job. Whether you mostly
agree or disagree with his claim, Burr's bit stands on the honest
truth of his convictions and even if the specific examples can be
argued, the truth of the assertion to
him
cannot be and that's what makes it very effective.
Lastly,
in my own act I have a bit about wondering what my great achievements
will be at the end of my life. I say that if one is famous, one's
greatest achievements- in the form of a professional label- go right
on the gravestone, underneath your name. I then list what will be
under my name on my gravestone, “Comedian... Substitute Teacher....
Tech Support Specialist.... Door to Door Census Worker
(seasonally).....” And it keeps going. The idea is that rather than
the simple, elegant statement of “Sir Laurence Olivier – Actor”
or “George Washington – President”, my gravestone will be
diluted by the many unspectacular jobs I've had. As with the previous
examples, the bit's strength is in the elaboration and writing of
specific references with a building exaggeration, as opposed to the
clipped, hyper-economical jokes/punchlines of the ironic character
act. And the premise is an attitude, opinion or thought that the
comedian really has.
Either
type of act- ironic character or honest opinion conversationalist-
can make for a very strong and successful performer, but
understanding the division between the two is important, as is
adhering to one or the other style consistently. While some comedians
blur the line and do both kinds of jokes, a large scale study of
standup comedians will show almost all immensely famous and high
impacting performers come out of the population of comedians staying
strictly on one side of the line.
You
might be wondering-- if you're not concerned with being a stage
performing standup comedian, but are just delivering the occasional
roast speech for a private or business events, how do these two
schools of standup impact relate to the roast jokes you will be
telling. That's a good question. Roast jokes can actually cross over
the line between honest opinion and ironic make-believe, although
they tend toward the former. The roast form has its own specific
situational needs which transcend the rules of a regular standup act,
which is persona-based over the long haul, while a roast is much more
material-based covering what is usually a concentrated burst of jokes
lasting 10 minutes or less. Whichever comedic activity you may be up
to in the near (or far) future, you can always consider hiring a
professional comedy writer to help get you on your feet and getting
laughs right away! A good example of such is Funny
Biz Speech Writers- mention the word “Flapjack” to get 10%
off on your first order and a complimentary insult.
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