Wednesday, October 5, 2022

Persona (or Brand) in Comedy

 

You will hear the word ‘persona’ thrown around in discussions about standup comedy, as well as in reference to actors and other performers. ‘Persona’ applies to a specific attitude, style, appearance or some combination of those things, of a person, adding up to the externally observable reduction of a personality.


‘Persona’ is similar to the word ‘brand,’ and whereas decades ago ‘brand’ generally denoted a well known corporate product (Coke, Marlboro, Budweiser, Cadillac), nowadays the term just as likely refers to the unique essence of a popular or notorious figure, someone getting a lot of press, chatter and media exposure. Madonna, the Duck Dynasty guys and Dennis Rodman all have brands (respectively, sexy and imperious, folksy and unvarnished, hedonistic and unpredictable).


Jerry Seinfeld Comedian


So these days the terms ‘persona’ and ‘brand’ are almost interchangeable when referring to a comedian. And in comedy, one’s brand can get them new followers quickly, can make their material hit much more powerfully, and it can shield them from what would otherwise be devastating consequences on their career for doing bits or making comments that are considered offensive or highly provocative.


Let’s take some examples. If Jerry Seinfeld, Ellen Degeneres or Brian Regan did jokes on stage, or made statements on a popular podcast, that were considered distastefully profane, overly violent or politically charged and controversial, it’s extremely likely it would be commented about in the press, on social media, at the proverbial “water cooler” at work. Such public utterances would be considered shocking and “out of character for any of those comedians. They would be defying and contradicting their brands, which in all cases are “safe, friendly, universally palatable comedy you can invite whole family or the whole office to.” None of these comedians has pushed the edges already and carved out room for controversy, profanity and potentially offensive opinions. They’ve gained tremendous success and wide audiences with their brand, but their brand also does not allow them to deliver such content with relative impunity and the assent or at least toleration of the the overwhelming majority of their following.


Ellen Degeneres Comedian


Conversely, if any of the aforementioned categories of “difficult” content come out of the mouths of Bill Burr, Jim Jefferies or Louie CK, not only would there not be much public pushback or surprise, they would actually be rewarded by their following for committing to what the fans have come to love and expect- very edgy material with brutally strong opinions and a tendency to go right up the edge of forbidden or taboo expression. These guys have laid down their chips on one far end of the spectrum and they have very few fans who take offense to such content. In fact, their core fans would actually get angry and likely walk away if said comedians got noticeably clean, polite and un-controversial with their acts.


Jim Jefferies Comedian


Where all of this might concern a non-comedian is in the giving of a funny speech for a private, work or other public type of event. Even a non-comedian acting as comedian for the day at an event, can benefit by cultivating a persona or brand that benefits and complements the tone of the speech being given. If the funny speech- whether it’s a wedding speech, best man speech, maid of honor speech or funny corporate speech- has some edge to it, if there is hard, cutting wit in the lines and some darts must be thrown, so to speak, then cultivating a persona of straight-faced, deadpan jester will help the speech giver to pull off the words with aplomb and success.


Bill Burr Comedian


Think Stephen Colbert, Bill Maher, Jimmy Kimmel or Nicki Glaser-- all are a combination of likable, polished, deadpan, and possessing a wily sharp edge that’s concealed under a very presentable, smooth exterior passing itself off as beyond reproach. 


Stephen Colbert Comedian


Such a combination adds up to a persona that really helps coat the “bitter pill” of strong, cutting-edge comedy with the “sugar” of a commanding, suave and sure-footed attitude.

Monday, July 11, 2022

Writing It Yourself vs Hiring a Pro Comedic Speech Writer: The Plain Facts

Recently I found myself explaining to a client what the difference is between your regular average speech that they would write and the professional comedic speech that I will write. Actually, in this case, his self-written speech wasn’t just a theoretical case, he had actually written a draft for himself before he decided to hire a professional writer. 

Comedy Speech Writer


As I told this client, his speech had some charm and a light tone intertwined throughout. It is what you might call “lightly amusing” if an audience really isn’t expecting much (or anything) in the Funny department. Many of the sentences and even paragraphs were earnest and flowery self-compliments with no comedic twist and the “stories” had natural hunor to them, but they were told in a plain, straightforward, drawn out way with no re-focusing to add/create punchlines along the way. My client here is completely normal, and representative of most non-professional writers. Especially non comedic-professional writers. He was having a notable personality and title holder in his town officiate his wedding, and deliver a speech about himself and his bride. He wanted it to be really funny and worthy of the event and the important man delivering it on the couple’s behalf. The smartest move he could’ve made was to hire a professional comedic speech writer. And thankfully, he did!


Wedding Speech



What a pro comedic speech writer will do is mold each line, using precision and efficiency of language, which greatly aid the phenomenon of comedy. The “setups” - the straight, “real” piece of information are relatively quick, and totally TRUE, with the “punchline”, the twist, the payoff, the big laugh line, using some element of comedy writing, be it hyper exaggeration, analogy, comparison, left turn substitution, or what have you. The speech is a series of very sharp jokes- of the level of a Comedy Central or HBO presentation- that adhere to time tested structures of quality joke writing. The speech is poignant, relevant and detailed- because it’s all based on real qualities, quirks and anecdotes of the honorees, but it’s laugh out loud funny, with a rapid pace of punchlines, because it’s the result of years of training and practice in comedic writing. Which is no normal or easy to master skill. 


Funny Speech Writer



So, next time you want to “crush it”, as we say in the biz, at a public or private event, be smart like this client of mine and hire a proven and tested pro comedic speech writer to do the heavy lifting, so you can kick back and then take in the glory! .


Sunday, January 9, 2022

How I Came to This Comedy Writing Life

 When people say “That’s so interesting! How did you get into that?” upon learning what I do, I give them the nutshell history. Because it’s en excellent question and, as I always so, I came to this work of custom writing funny speeches, roasts, presentations, lectures and other public speaking products and documents very organically.

Comedy writer


I fell into standup comedy in the late 1990’s shortly after moving to Los Angeles. I moved to LA with creative showbiz endeavors in mind, but leaning much more toward screenwriting and acting. Standup was not even a thought as I arrived in a rental car, driving down from San Francisco, where I’d been living for a few years, a Boston native seeking some version of the California Dream.


As a kid I’d always absolutely loved comedy, humor, jokes, funniness- whichever terms one might use. I was laser focused on and enthralled by Saturday Night Live sketches, and avidly consumed records on my parents’ shelves by comedians like Richard Pryor, George Carlin and Mel Brooks with Carl Reiner. Shortly later I’d go get my own comedy records, like Steve Martin’s Let’s Get Small and Wild & Crazy Guy, and The Wedding Album by Cheech & Chong. In Mr Pradell’s 6th grade class, in our Boston suburb, I would recite memorized Steve Martin bits for my table mates, noticing that they seemed, if not utterly captivated, then at least modestly entertained by the impromptu show.


Comedian


Joking around and doing silly voices, coming up with catchy inside slang terms for use by my circle of friends, writing a produced play in 4th grade titled Alexander Graham Cracker- while none of these were of the level of work required of an adult in entertainment, as with pretty much all comedians, these modest outputs of crude humor laid the foundation-- they were building blocks of an affinity and an aptitude for being able to make people laugh.


After moving to San Francisco a few years after graduating from college, I started attending a drop-in improvisational theater class, taught by this charismatic actor who’d been in some widely seen and heard in some TV and radio commercials around the Bay Area. Later I joined the more formally structured Bay Area Theater Sports for a couple of levels, and although improvisation doesn’t strictly necessitate “jokes”, anyone with the slightest mind for humor will often come up with lines that have a comedic twist. You don’t need to be funny, but good funny is certainly effective and appreciated.


After moving down to Los Angeles, it was around a year before I even attempted a standup open mic. I had been going as an audience member to an especially magical sort of comedy show at the old Largo (they’ve since moved locations into a theater space), a bar/restaurant/showroom where many excellent, creative and smart standups would work out their material- old and new- at a Monday night show. Watching that inspired me to try an open mic at a coffee house in Santa Monica on a Sunday night, and getting any laughs at all led me to keep on going to mics and finding my way.


Funny Speech Writer


Within a few years, a handful of comedians I was friendly with asked me to write jokes for them. I did it for the thrill, the challenge, the satisfaction of hearing them use the jokes on stage at clubs, or on one of their late night TV spots.


Through the years since then, writing sketches, short films, bits for TV shows, humor pieces for magazines and a LOT of standup jokes and bits, it made good sense to me to share what I’ve worked on and gotten really good at with “regular”, non-entertainment people, professionals who benefit immensely from being funny in a real life or work situation.


In the last couple years I wrote a large part of 2 very well-selling creative-exercise books, with a lot of humor, for a top LA marketing guru; had a few humorous greeting cards I wrote sell good numbers for the Frank N Funny series; and a short, comedic film script I wrote was produced in West Texas by a successful director/producer with a half dozen feature films under his belt.


I feel grateful for the projects I’ve gotten to work on, and whatever project I work on with whichever clients, I bring the totality of that experience to the work. Comedic writing isn’t what I thought I would get into when I was a little kid, but now it feels like it’s where I’m meant to be.


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